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俗话说,临阵磨枪......全在收口。
又到了一年一度的高考,高考英语作文需要注意哪些方面呢? Laura为考生做一个简单的总结:

①审题:画出重点,不跑题,确定文章体裁。
②写提纲:以短语形式确定每一段每一句的内容。
③内容:言之有物,有说服力(convincing)。
④逻辑:注意要点之间的逻辑以及段落之间的衔接
⑤语言:出彩句子的比例(30-40%);做到长短句结合、用词准确地道;偶尔使用被动;避免句式、单词的重复使用等。

下面是Laura老师写的几篇例文,供考生参考。内容包括成语、汉字听写大赛、学中文、中国文学作品、中国古诗词、高铁、通知、申请信、邀请信、求助信、推荐信。

假定你是李华,你的外国笔友Peter对中国成语很感兴趣,向你咨询有关中国成语的信息,请你写一封信,包括以下内容:
简单介绍成语的特点;学习成语的益处;分享自己学习成语的感受和体会

Dear Peter
I'm glad that you are interested in Chinese idioms. And I'm writing to give you a brief introduction.
Acknowledged as the treasure of Chinese culture, Chinese idioms enjoys huge popularity with its rich content and brief language. With only 4 Chinese characters, they depict historical stories and express profound meanings at the same time. Therefore, it is of huge benefits to learn them. You will find it an effective way to understand Chinese culture, enrich knowledge and express yourself.
As for me, I often find myself immersed in the vivid stories, which in turn strengthens my memory and understanding. And my language learning has reached a new level as a result.
Hope you find the above helpful. If you have any further questions, feel free to contact me.
I sincerely hope you can learn them well.

假如你是李华,你的美国朋友Peter想提高中文水平,进一步了解中国文化。请给他写一封信,推荐学习资源(resource)。内容包括:
1 学习资源:报纸、杂志及其他途径   2 推荐理由   3 表达祝愿

Dear Peter

Knowing that you have a strong desire to improve your Chinese and understand Chinese culture further, I'm writing to give you some recommendations.
To equip yourself with excellent language skills, there're plenty of resources to refer to. Beautiful in language, correct in grammar and varied in form, newspapers and magazines are a very good choice, which also enables you to catch a glimpse of Chinese culture as well as society. As the old saying goes, strike the iron while it is hot. Having read the daily news, you can log onto Wechat and make some Chinese friends. In this way, you're actually applying what you have learned to everyday life.
Hope the above would be of some help. Wish you great progress in your study.

假如你是李华,最近在写一篇关于北美原住民(native Americans)文化和习俗的论文,但国内有关的英文参考书籍较少。你想麻烦你的美国笔友Mike帮你买一些这方面的书。请写封信:
1.买书的原因   2.对书的要求(如数量、寄送时间等)  3.付款方式

Dear Mike

How's everything going? I'm writing to ask you for a favor.
Recently, I'm writing a paper about the culture and custom of native Americans, which I think is refreshing and intriguing. And I dive into it immediately. However, I sadly find that the reference books on such a topic are rare and hard to obtain, so I was wondering if you could buy some reference books for me in the US. And three books are just enough. My paper is due at the end of this month, so if you could send the books by airmail, it'll save me much time. I'll pay for the book and postage through online banking service.

Many thanks in advance for your help. Looking forward to your reply.

你是中学生李华,你从学校网站了解到你校外籍交换生Peter想聘请一名中国学生辅导他学习汉语,你对此很感兴趣,请给他写封邮件:
1.个人简介   2.应聘原因   3.询问要求

Dear Peter

Knowing that you are looking for a Chinese students to help you study Chinese, I feel interested and I'm writing to introduce myself.
As a high school student, I'm an enthusiastic reader. Chinese poetry, contemporary classics and classical literature are my favorites, which not only lay a solid foundation for my language learning, but also enlarge my knowledge in Chinese culture. Seeing your post, I believe this is a good chance for us to exchange our ideas and broaden our horizons. Therefore, I would very much like to apply for the job.
Hope you can take me into consideration. If there are any requirements for the job, please let me know. Your prompt reply would be highly appreciated.

你的英国朋友Jim在给你的邮件中提到他对中国文学很感兴趣,并请你向他推荐一部优秀的中国文学作品。请你给他回信,内容包括:
1. 书的题目和作者  2. 书的主要内容  3.你的推荐理由。

Dear Jim

Knowing that you're interested in Chinese literature, I'm writing to recommend to you my favorite book: The Book of Songs.
Acknowledged as a classic in Chinese literature, The Book of Songs is the oldest collection of ancient Chinese poetry and the finest treasure of traditional songs. The songs and poems come from common people as well as nobles, which are rich in content, fresh in style and varied in form. All aspects of the society are covered in the book, such as work and love, war and peace, customs and traditions. It is not only a mirror reflecting the Zhou dynasty, but also the most valuable material in the study of ancient Chinese language.
The book enjoys huge popularity and I highly recommend it. The moment you open the book, you're leading yourself into the amazing world of ancient China.

某英文报社拟开辟“中国古诗谈”栏目。现在,请根据以下要点,写一篇短文投稿。
1.中国古诗影响深远;  2.学习中国古诗的意义及方法。

The ancient Chinese poetry is part of our traditional Chinese culture. Acknowledged as the treasure of Chinese literature, it has been passed down from generation to generation and its influence is far-reaching in both ancient and modern times.

Therefore, it is of significant meaning to learn it. First, it is an effective way to a better understanding of Chinese culture. At the same time, our level of appreciation and expression will be hugely enhanced as well. And the learning methods are varied and easy. Before diving into the poetry, we should acquaint ourselves with some background information of the history and the poets. And there's no need to look up every word in the dictionary. Sometimes repeated recitation helps a lot in our understanding.

Please join me in the world of poetry, and feel the beauty and charm of this poetic world.

国庆节即将来临,沈阳故宫将于国庆节期间免费向学生开放。请给即将来你校的交换生Tom写封邮件告知此事,内容包括:
1.开放时间:10月1日-7日      2.订票方式:提前3天网上预约     3.入场条件:出示学生证

Dear Tom

I'm glad to hear that you will come to visit China. In your letter you asked me about the sights of Shenyang, so I'm writing to tell you some good news.

To celebrate our National Day, Shenyang Imperial Palace will be open to students for free from 1st to 7th Oct., and this is a chance you should not miss. Shenyang is the birthplace of Qing Dynasty and remained the capital of China for a long time. By visiting ShenYang Imperial Palace, you can appreciate traditional Chinese culture as well as oriental architecture. If this sounds interesting to you, you just need to book a ticket online 3 days in advance and take your student card on the day of your visit.

Wish you a good time in Shenyang. If you have any further questions, don't hesitate to write to me. Looking forward to your reply.

你校乒乓球俱乐部招新,请给你的朋友Tom写信,邀请他加入,内容包括:
1.球队活动;2.报名方式及截止日期。

Dear Eric

It's been a while since we last met. How are you doing? Recently, the Table Tennis Club of our school is recruiting new members, which I think might be of some interest to you.
As a member of the club, I'm proud to say that the Table Tennis Club is one of the most popular clubs in our school, and many students are desperate to join it. The club holds regular activities. Every Monday afternoon is the training time. Members will be given professional instruction and one-on-one guidance. Every Friday afternoon, there will be group games where members are divided according to their skill levels. With intensive practice, everyone's  performance improves gradually.
If you are interested, you can log onto the school website and fill in an online form before 31st. July. If you have any questions, don't hesitate to write to me. / Hope the above information would be of some help to you.

为感受汉字之美,培养规范书写汉字的良好习惯,学校将举办听写比赛。请写一封通知,要求如下:
1.比赛的宗旨    2. 比赛内容   3.报名方式

To appreciate the charm of Chinese characters and form a habit of standard handwriting, our school plans to hold Chinese Characters Dictation Contest in the Science Hall on 22nd, May. The theme of the activity is the Beauty of Chinese Characters. The participants will hear and write 100 phrases. Those who score most will enter the final, where school leaders and Chinese teachers will gladly give away the prize. This is a chance to promote Chinese characters and a platform to spread traditional culture. All students are welcome to participate. If you are interested, please fill in the online form by Friday. Looking forward to your active participation.

假如你叫李华,你的英国笔友Tom想体验中国高铁,于是写邮件请你帮助买北京到黄山的高铁票。请你根据以下提示回一封邮件:
对他的到来表示欢迎;请他将护照复印件发至你的电子邮箱;当他到北京时,可以凭护照到车站取票;简单介绍中国的高铁
参考词汇: 高铁CRH
本文作者:东北育才学校1501班杨达书

Dear Tom

I'm so delighted to know that you are visiting China and planning to take a ride on CRH. Please accept my warmest welcome!
It's really a good choice to try CRH when travelling in China. Featuring high speed and advanced technology, CRH is crowned as the pearl of Made in China and symbolizes the rapid development of the country, which will definitely leave a deep impression on you.
To make it easier for me to buy you tickets, would you please send me the copy of your passport by e-mail? You can obtain your tickets by simply showing your passport at the train station after arriving in Beijing.
If there are any further questions, don't hesitate to write to me. Wish you an enjoyable time in China.

2016、2017年辽宁高考英文写作赏析,请观看视频:

https://v.qq.com/x/page/o0381097e8f.html

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